Oh, this was awsome! Really nice take on Teal'c's mother- I don't even think I have ever seen a version of her before in fanfic now that I'm thinking about it. Go Bra'tac! Being all honorable and romantic and one might even say sweet and mushy- for Bra'tac at least. I really, really really like this:
“You speak of shame and honor as though they are armies, Lady, when really they are finite quantities, to be bartered and sold.” Her arm remained around his, palm resting on his forearm, fingers making grooves in the fabric of his sleeve, the pressure steady. “I would willingly lend you honor, until such time as you may regain your own.”
I think it's one of the strongest bits of this fic and really defines alot about Bra'tac's beliefs.
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Date: 2006-12-05 03:21 am (UTC)“You speak of shame and honor as though they are armies, Lady, when really they are finite quantities, to be bartered and sold.” Her arm remained around his, palm resting on his forearm, fingers making grooves in the fabric of his sleeve, the pressure steady. “I would willingly lend you honor, until such time as you may regain your own.”
I think it's one of the strongest bits of this fic and really defines alot about Bra'tac's beliefs.
Very nice!