The voices are right on and Daniel's jumbled perceptions are really nicely articulated so that we get a sense of his disorientation without becoming disoriented in the story (always a difficult trick to pull off well, I think). And each member of the team is succinctly drawn. Very nicely done.
And this is perfect S4 Daniel: Perhaps his own life was something he would come to value because they did.
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Date: 2005-12-15 12:12 am (UTC)The voices are right on and Daniel's jumbled perceptions are really nicely articulated so that we get a sense of his disorientation without becoming disoriented in the story (always a difficult trick to pull off well, I think). And each member of the team is succinctly drawn. Very nicely done.
And this is perfect S4 Daniel: Perhaps his own life was something he would come to value because they did.
Perhaps.