Oh my goodness that was well done. I'm really fond of the disjointed chronology when it works and it works very well there, as did the notion that each of the AU team had a second sense that something was wrong... Sam's coming around and Jack's planting the idea accidentally was very in character too, very nice.
And, obviously I liked the hinting and the UST, but I wouldn't object to an epilogue with, you know, more smut. *G*
Very cool, though. Well crafted. Nice character voices. Yah hoo!
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Date: 2005-11-16 02:10 am (UTC)And, obviously I liked the hinting and the UST, but I wouldn't object to an epilogue with, you know, more smut. *G*
Very cool, though. Well crafted. Nice character voices. Yah hoo!