Dude, I should really transcribe that. The only problem is that it's all dialog with absolutely nothing else going on... I need to decide if anyone can see each other or whose POV I'm focusing on so that I can describe some other senses.
When is the Carnival due? Did I miss all of it? I should check.
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Date: 2007-09-13 05:34 am (UTC)When is the Carnival due? Did I miss all of it? I should check.
...ooooh, maybe I could play with omnicience!