Beautiful. It stays completely Bra'tac, and uncovers a part of him that just never got shown in the show. And uncovers Teal'c mother ,who's pretty much a mystery, but must have been a very strong woman to do the things she did.

Particularly loved, "It is a burden, Bra’tac, make no mistake; however, to serve your people is worth the price".

Because that was Teal'c, and Bra'tac, in a nutshell. And they both got it from the same source.