Ooooh, you visited! *pets you* You might not have been entirely wrong about that grammar stuff. But don't tell anyone I said that.

Warm fuzzies, huh? And I thought this was one of the harder ones to write because they didn't understand each other most of the way through. The good intentions were always there, though, so maybe the peril wasn't quite that... perilous? Would it be more interesting, I wonder, to let them have just a little bit of peril?