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eve11 ([personal profile] eve11) wrote in [personal profile] minxy 2005-12-14 08:22 pm (UTC)

Oh, well done. I liked this a lot. This is my favorite part:


“Daniel,” Jack entered the cave with silent footsteps and a large shadow, “Finish those drawings double time. Jaffa presence is increasing this way. We have got to get a move on.”

“Rubbings.”

“What?”

“Can’t we just hole up here, sneak out later?”

“The Colonel is right, Daniel, our tracks will lead them right to this cave and the stone if we aren’t careful.”

“Let me just do one more video pass.”

“I shall remove the evidence of our presence here.”

“Daniel, we have exactly no time for dallying.”


*loves*

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