Aw shucks yourself. Picture perfect is inspiring quite a lot of beta-blathering (note the difference between that and beta-correcting)... is there a better way for me to comment than in the fic? I can, if you prefer, make the changes in the fic and then send you an email with it 'splaining why... but that seems so presumptuous that you'll take all the suggestions.

And that right there, is that a gauntlet I see? I challenge thee! You post something by the time I get this THIRD beta'd piece back to you! There 'tis.

And, I'm at least a third of the way through it, so get crackin!

(that is, you know, if you feel like it.) *G*